literature

Chestnut Tinted Hair

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Literature Text

Misutahomuzu observes my hair,
I hope that's what he's watching from behind.
I feel a scrutiny within that stare;
So penetrating I could lose my mind.
I can't go on like this, why can't he find
Somebody else to fix under his glare?
I turn around, glare back, respond in kind,
I fix my gaze upon his own short hair.
His mouth falls open, protests tumble out,
Insistently he tries to tell me lies.
He tries to say he's not a drunken lout,
And though I felt the gaze of his blue eyes
Upon my body after I walked past,
T'was chestnut tinted hair he watched, not arse.
Chat event: Equilibrium

1) Pick up a book (or a poetry collection!), and open it to a random page.
2) Pick a sentence. (or, well, you could just make up your own sentence. This'll just save you time if you have trouble.)
3) Take the sentence to [link]
4) Have the site translate it into the language of choice.
5) Translate the translation until it stops at an equilibrium.
6) Write a poem or a bit of flash fiction based off how this new sentence relates to its original self.


My sentence: As you may observe, Mr. Holmes, my hair is somewhat luxuriant, and of a rather peculiar tint of chestnut.

Translates to: They are chestnut color, rich is a bit unique Misutahomuzu can observe my hair.
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Ogrefairy's avatar
*giggles* That's very interesting. I like the result.