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With my eyes closed, under the rain
As thunder rumbles overhead.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
The lightning is close, yet I remain
Standing there, both arms outspread
With my eyes closed, under the rain
This storm sent from God's domain
Fills me with energy, from Him I am fed.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
This feeling of power is hard to explain
Why bother to try? I stay instead
With my eyes closed, under the rain
This feeling of power, it flows through my veins
It takes over every thought in my head.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
This feeling of power I cannot contain.
It overflows as I stand frozen with dread
With my eyes closed, under the rain
I feel alive; I feel insane.
As thunder rumbles overhead.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
The lightning is close, yet I remain
Standing there, both arms outspread
With my eyes closed, under the rain
This storm sent from God's domain
Fills me with energy, from Him I am fed.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
This feeling of power is hard to explain
Why bother to try? I stay instead
With my eyes closed, under the rain
This feeling of power, it flows through my veins
It takes over every thought in my head.
I feel alive; I feel insane.
This feeling of power I cannot contain.
It overflows as I stand frozen with dread
With my eyes closed, under the rain
I feel alive; I feel insane.
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Literature
On Writing
all the words
all the senses
all the dirt and smell and roughness
the bursting heart
fresh cold water
CRASH of waves and then the ache within
trickling nothing tears and itching legs
all these things
someone wrote them, a bit.
How can you tell anyone
else? How can you thrust
the living today
into someone else's soul?
This is just a nut in a banana leaf.
Literature
In the Syllable
...then there is a way in diswaiting.
Dust some yellow sand covers,
here uncover bare bedding.
...suffusing red planes, blushed dunes,
under incidentally quilted blanket
wet as arid curves, as sounds.
...in a persistent pavement,
in a solemn unsuited promise,
some written words erase
some letters drip and soak
unto a perfuse miracle,
a dislocated split,
a letting go of...
Literature
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Messing with fixed forms again. This one is a villanelle.
I was sat staring at a blank notepad for ages trying to write a villanelle, couldn't for the life of me come up with anything. Then
's new prompt 'I'm Alive' showed up in my inbox and I combined it with no.30 off the 100TC - 'Under the Rain' to come up with this. Nice timing, #Live-Love-Write!
I was sat staring at a blank notepad for ages trying to write a villanelle, couldn't for the life of me come up with anything. Then
's new prompt 'I'm Alive' showed up in my inbox and I combined it with no.30 off the 100TC - 'Under the Rain' to come up with this. Nice timing, #Live-Love-Write!Comments5
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((Yes it's me. i said I would read a little today. G.G ))
But wow.... I don't know what it is about when you write but I can always really feel your words... I feel like I'm out there standing in the rain and feeling powerful and insane and alive. I don't know why but your writing just always seems really strong to me. You must just have some power with words.
But wow.... I don't know what it is about when you write but I can always really feel your words... I feel like I'm out there standing in the rain and feeling powerful and insane and alive. I don't know why but your writing just always seems really strong to me. You must just have some power with words.